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Darkness

Standing in the darkness
She is dancing
Setting herself free.

A contest entry

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  • aaaaaaaa
    May 18, 2008
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    This is good! good job with the prompt.


  • Blooming Poet
    May 18, 2008
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    Beautiful word here, especially for your young age. Great write.


  • liduen silver member
    May 18, 2008

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    10 powerful words of truth. I love to dance and it is such a freeing experience. I love this poem!