Little girls dream of wedding days
Perfect, joyous in every way
The perfect man
The perfect life
She will be the perfect wife
Then later comes reality
Fairytales not meant to be
Too many wrongs
Sadly few rights
Tears that fall too many nights
Author notes
Pic credit to go to Mark Ryden
http://www.markryden.com/paintings/index.html
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt by Lil-Bit Crazy.
600 points, ended May 18, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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True little tale written in red and very complimentary of the fair face "lost" image. Makes you wonder how long they suffer will they learn in the early 20s, be lucky in their mid thirties, ...just how long will they suffer the mirage of fantasy. Loved this poem!
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this gave true facts and truths in some situations you know i enjoyed this best of luck to you in the contest you did a great job
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interesting... seems tho i never had those dreams.. but still a great write... thanks for entering and goood luck in contest....
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My pleasure Lil Bit!
Such an unusual picture! The poem almost wrote itself!
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yea... btw my name is michelle... just so you know... lol.... hope your having a great day..
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