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Your “come on” smile
beautiful brown eyes tease
heart hesitates…

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10 words

Prompt = Tease me with hopes and illusive smiles

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  • Sweet Sorrow
    May 19, 2008

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    So much meaning in so very little words. You did capture the prompt so well. Well done. Thanks for sharing your inner thoughts with me, Goodluck.


  • Blood Bloom
    May 18, 2008

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    I like it. I'll email it to my friend (with your permision of course!) She loves poetry with this much meaning. Good luck in the contest too!