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Saying what i am too scared to say

I called your name so softly, but in my head i screamed - your walking down the platform, this world not what it seems

i shed a tear of waterfalls - my world is falling down, a world without the love of you is a world turned upside down

slow-ly you turn and look at me, that deepness in your eyes - im begging you with just one look - im screaming deep inside

i feel your heartbeat racing - as i hold you to my chest - for all the perfect summers this one will be the best

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just a little something i thought up, its not great i know, its more a chain of thought than a poem

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  • Hekate gold member
    May 18

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    Welcome To AP

    Hello adam2008,

    Ah some memories do indeed stay with you for life. It's a good thing that this one is such a great one
    Love the imagery in this piece

    Kari,
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  • Yahiko
    May 18

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    I'll agreee partially with that... because that is what a poem is is more of your subconcious thinking which is like a chain of thought.... poetry has no rules nor boundaries so if you say it's a poem than it shall be a poem.