on this day
the underworld
wants to celebrate your birth.
for if it's just a dream,
i ask from you,
who would want to wake?
for a birthday cake,
an offering,
i sacrifice myself.
suck my blood
take all you want
cause it won't hurt a bit.
in fact it's quite pleasing
a tingle in my neck
chills running up and down my spine
and then a thoughtfull toast
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nice
short and too the point. lots of emotion, and it sounds like a wonderful feeling. -
QuItE iNtErEsTiNg??DiS iS GrEaT!!i LuV hOw U pUt Da WoRdS n Da FlOw!!AwSuM pOeM!!
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quite interesting.
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