In her slumber
she dreams of peace
where visions of happiness
lay burdens at ease
Inside those dreams
lies a garden of light
keeping her warm
on a cold, lonely night
Soft whispers hum
of angelic song
she sleeps contented
for she's not alone
Author notes
Pic credit to go to Mark Ryden
http://www.markryden.com/paintings/index.html
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt by Lil-Bit Crazy.
600 points, ended May 18, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Golden words... so gentle and soft with such beautiful meaning... I love this side of you and the warm heart it shows...
Ken
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Aww Thank you dear sweet man. That's so kind of you.
Linda
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i love this.. thank you very much for sharing this and thank you for entering in my contest... good luck in this contest.....
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Wow Thank you for Gold hun, I'm really touched. I'm glad you liked it because it was really written just for you!
Linda
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Aww! I think your muse is working perfectly! This was just gorgeous... like a soft lullaby!!
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You are just too kind dear lady Thank you, it means alot coming from you!
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WOW!! What a beautiful job you did on this one!! This is pure magic... I love it!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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You, sweetness, are ever so kind to me, thank you..it means alot.
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Nicely done Linda. Nice form and flow. Great rhyming. I am glad to see that that skill has not left you. Great take on the prompt.
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Thank you Chucky, that's very sweet of you! I appreciate it.
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aw this is so cute! i like how u rhyme, even tho it's more subtle. it was a great write and i hope to c more of ur work!
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Thanks for your kind comment
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