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Variations On A Theme



My talent is not awesome ...
but it's not really for the birds.
You can feed me lots of crow,
but I'll never eat my words.

And though I feast on little else,
nor question why ... nor how ...
my favorite meal's hamburger from
Conventional Wisdom's sacred cow.


Please tell me what you think, unless you are a total idiot. If so, keep it to yourself.

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  • This is a dandy of a poem you have written
    Your words are very thought provoking
    And the rhythm and wording is wonderfully weaved.
    Thnk you so much for this entry.
    Best of wishes to you

    Tony

  • I had to laugh with this ditty - very up tempo when read out loud. It's almost seeming to poke fun at self at the same time it is standing up self self. Yeah, like that! I can't think how to describe it, my brain is not working fully...I need caffeine...


  • suseann
    May 18

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    You know! This is a great start of lyrics. It's theme is down to earth "I said so",sort of matter of fact. It screams humility yet expresses sureness and resolve.


  • Selithia
    May 18

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    just awesome

    Your poetry is so awesome.... I loved this and i believe it could mean a number of different things,but for the main part,im still thinking. All of your work is so thought provoking. The word flow is always perfect. I never find mistakes with you,and im a critique from hell. Great work!