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Sunday


He saunters into the kitchen
where she's preparing vegetables,
'Are you crying?' he asks.
'It's the onions,' she lies.
He gives a shrug and heads for the TV,
leaving her to die inside.


















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  • thepoetssoul gold member
    May 19
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    Oh my... I just want to grab this man and shake himAnd i want to sit her down and tell her to express how she really feel'sThis is a very unique poem you have written,and I rather enjoyed itThanks for your entry, and best of wishes to you

    Tony


  • Noir mariposa...x
    May 18

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    " 'Are you crying?' he asks.
    'It's the onions,' she lies. "

    This is sooooo sad!!

    I wish you luck in the contest

    Noir xx