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" LOOSE MOOSE" Haiku

the loose Moose
killed the Goose
no golden egg

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Poor Jack no more golden Eggs

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 7, 2008
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    Ha ha....laughing as we have been hearing about a gal who likes eating moose meat....and someone's goose was killed....and there is no golden egg!...Rather humorous connection after Nov. 4th....maybe some won't see it that way...but it came alive even though this was written May 18th...Strange connection..Really funny!


  • Swan song gold member
    May 24, 2008
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    lolololol This was hilarious!!!!


  • CountryCousin
    May 18, 2008

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    Cute.

    I do funny little Nursery Rhymes myself. This one is cute and makes a neat haiku. So good to read your poetry and hope you are well.