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The knight has sheathed his sword,
Handed the lance to his squire,
Watered his horse.

The enemy's corpse lies on the field,
Awaiting removal,
His armor and weapons claimed
By the victor.

This battle need not be refought,
Even should the patient be
A hypochondriac.

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Prompt: 'Prescription not refillable.'

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  • Cinnarry gold member
    May 24, 2008
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    The last stanza was great@


    • Aerden gold member
      May 26, 2008
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      I'm glad you liked it. And thanks for giving me the interesting prompt to write about.