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Splash

Yellowing pages
Never written on
Dying for someone alter them

Ink and blood

Mar pages

Artist leaves the world behind

 

 

Author notes

I have no idea at all what I was thinking
but for some reason this fragmented story seemed to pop into my mind!
Hope you like it!

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  • Perception
    May 21, 2008

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    I really like what you are saying here... Pages longing to be written on.
    Somehow... This touches me =/
    Hm.
    Thanks for entering


  • greatperhaps
    May 20, 2008
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    this is almost a hiku! exceot it's not... right. So I like the poem. It's got an interesting idea, and cuz it's short, not a lot of build-up, but that works for it. Veeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyy interesting. should be good insight into a strange mind. good luck in the contest!


  • marlene47 silver member
    May 19, 2008
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    Interesting ending you have.
    Marlene

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