With every passing day,
A piece breaks off;
Fragments of a heart
Fade away...
Love that was once here
Can now not be found;
Somewhere is a heart,
Yet it is not near.
A soul lies broken,
Unable to feel,
Disconnected from a heart...
Love is left unspoken
Author notes
omg that was one of the most horrid poems i've ever written..so torturous!!! save me! XD
A contest entry
- Bring on the Cliche Poetry!! by masky.
1800 points, ended June 5, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Ok, I read the author notes - it is NOT horrid! It just needs punctuation the proper way, and this is precisely what I am going to do!
Here we go:
"With every passing day,
A piece breaks off;
Fragments of a heart
Fade away...
Love that was once here
Can now not be found;
Somewhere is a heart,
Yet it is not near.
A soul lies broken,
Unable to feel,
Disconnected from a heart...
Love is left unspoken."
Also, I'll have to thank you for writing a cliche poem especially for me - I really really really appreciate it!!
See you in the finals, then!
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wow! thanks i really appreciate it!
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Truly my pleasure
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I agree...there is nothing worse than love left unspoken.
another sad one
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thank you!
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i liked this one...its very nice
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thank you!
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yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.... have to say that had some problems.... Wait, so the heart is falling apart, but it's not connected to the soul, so it cannot show the love? ok then. Good luck in the contest!
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i have no idea...lady you are just too cruel...it's supposed to be cliche in my mind any poem about love is cliche...i'm really quite enjoying myself at this moment....i am speaking with a british accent as i type these words...for i feel that writing poetry while reading it with a british accent makes the poem better...you need to try it..i believe it really does help...hey do you get points for writng extra long comments on your own page????? anyways isn't prince caspian yummy? he looked so good in the movie yesterday..yes i did see...yes with my brother and mother...no i do not wish to speak more of it than just prince caspian real name ben barnes....it was good film much better than the first one....ay you know nora burd's lyric contest that she won? well i recorded it about 6 times in audacity...it was quite fun...and i have to say her lyrics are very good..the "baby" just needs to be slightly adjusted for it does not flow with the rest of the the song...but i will speak to her of this later...at school tomorrow...cheerio have good day aymmay! if my carpal tunnel was not hurting before i blame you it kills now!
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