Author notes
This is a haiku and tanka using emoticons..
No email
slow clock (time on )wall, looking everywhere,
call, talk music to ears
Rose, heart dancing, more rose
(wishing) goodbye in love, blushing
In a list
A contest entry
- emotiku by Yemassee.
537 points, ended May 23, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ha this is great
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Thanks!
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This is one of my favourites in this contest
I like the slow hours making one crazy to a point to bang the head on the wall (my version anyway )
Very cute.
The photo you have as image face is simply adorable, pretty little girl
Mari
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Thanks..glad you like it!
The cute little girl is my daughter!She IS adorable!
Have a nice day!
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This is really cute. I like the idea
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It is a lot of fun...do try it!
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oh my gosh that is just brilliant!!!!! The best I've read so far... heheheh... cute cute cute!!!
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Keep up the dance...lol
glad you like it! hope you are entering the ocntest...loads of fun!
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This is good We dont often see such expression in poetry
Very cute
You did well with this and your translation in your author notes helps
Good luck in the contest
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Thanks a lot for your kind words...
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awww love this... needed to see this lovely today blessings always and best to you in the contest~ sissy trisha
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Thanks a lot sis..this is a lot of fun, do try!many
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Ah, it makes sense! It's that waiting for a special friend to email, and then a phone call from that person and the anguish turns to joy, very clever and you proved to me that a haiku with emoticons can be done! Thanks for entering the contest.
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You are very welcome..this was certainly fun!
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That's cute.
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Thanks....have a nice day!
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This is so cute!
You used them very well.
Good luck with the mail
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Thanks a lot
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I love it LOL
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Thanks some 4 U 2
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