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Selfishness

When you act selfishly
there are consequences
that must be considered.

Selfish actions will often cause pain
and hurt the ones you love.
Because you are only helping yourself.

It's is these actions
that nagg at your conscience
and tell you you've done wrong.

Where as if you act selflessly
then you cannot feel guilt.

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Selfish actions lead to painful consequences. This I must pay for before I can forgive. -prompt

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  • Sunshine Princess
    May 18, 2008

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    Lots of people are selfish and only think of themself and not who they heart this is nice poem and truthfull goodluck