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Canvas

Greenery scents the mist.
Birds converse,
Rustling their wings.
Sunlight speckles
Leaf-strewn earth.
Water plummets toward water,
Seeking reunion.

Cool droplets paint the wooden balcony
And me.  I am part
Of the canvas.

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By Aerden

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  • crivanea silver member
    July 16

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    so lovely ..just a breath of fresh air..thank you for these lovely imagery..you did a great work that manages to pain the nature with bold lines and soft tones..good job..I applaud you for this write


  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    May 22, 2008

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    Wow! What a marvellous take, and so so gorgously written! Wow!! Thanks for the entry and goooood luck!