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"How It Feels"

Who I am I just don't know.
My feelings I never show.
I need to breakdown and cry.
Somebody please stop just ask me "why?"
Lift this burden.
Cease my tears.
Cause I want to know how it feels...how it feels to be real.

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  • Blackwinged Angel
    May 18, 2008

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    Emotion

    Emotion that is what I get when I read this... The raw feeling of wanting, and yearning for something to make your life feel like it is worth living... Great poem Avias...

  • adam2008
    May 18, 2008
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    wow thats deep ... the last line, "how it feels to be real" so touching