The feeling makes it worth the fight
As you dive to the depths of her soul,
Where suddenly you stand alone
Atop a sheer ravine
And you're falling slowly
(oh so slowly)
Over the edge of her beauty.
Her spirit whispers to you by night
And you call out for her
To guide you there
Where love resides
And tears have no home,
A place and time where she loves you too
And all this pain was worth it.
Author notes
Option 3 - Wordbank
All words used
A contest entry
- OPTIONS - Come and see!!!! PW ARE ALLOWED - by mystic-angel.
900 points, ended May 19, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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A great write! Good imagery and feeling. A brilliant use of the wordbank. Well written and well done on using all of the words. Thanks for your entry. Good luck!
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