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Second Chance

We would stay for hours
Just letting our imagination pour out
Allowing us to forget about everything
With our minds and words, we would sculpt kingdoms
But, soon, I found that words were powerful things

As monthes flew by, I realized with a guilty feeling
Somehow, I created a character from mine and another's imagination
Who was played out to be real

With the unknown help of one that I speak to no more
I dug down deep to explore
How far I could go into your heart
I never knew for sure

I know that I crushed you
When you found out that he wasnt real
Your bared out emotions, taken and torn
I know, and with each thought it hurts inside, always more

I was grateful that after, you didn't block me out completly
But now I'm not so sure
If I could turn back time, I'd tell you the truth
I've never been so stupid, and just for you, I really would
I know I wasted the first one, and its selfish to ask
But, please, I have to know...may I have a second chance?

I took the first one and wasted it, and you have every right not to give me another chance, but I miss you, I do. It might seem strange for me to miss somebody this bad, but I do. If you could give me another chance, I promise to cherish this one, and not lead you on again. No more lies, Tobari, I swear

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Me and her used to sit at the compooter for hours, talking, and creating a game with our minds, it was awesome. but then, she fell for somebody who wasnt real, and it all fell apart..can you tell me if I can improve it for her?

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