"I'm surprised that you've never been told before, that you're lovely, and you're perfect, and that somebody wants you"
I know you have been told before
how beautiful you truly are
your smile melts my frozen heart
they way our bodies never part
The touch of your skin, your taste
the cologne you wear simmers the air
the hope we have together a pair
I love you, within you I baste
Your eyes light up when I come in
The smile you wear tingles my skin
touching your body makes me complete
you in my life is totally sweet
You are beautiful in my eyes
the words other speak are lies
your a gift that touches my heart
completing my life to never part
Author notes
"I'm surprised that you've never been told before, that you're lovely, and you're perfect, and that somebody wants you"
I hope this is what you wanted.
A contest entry
- You're perfect by Welcome-To-Hell.
825 points, ended June 4, 2008, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a beautiful write full of heart and emotion accompanied with an interesting rhyme scheme well done best of luck in the contest
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Simply beautiful and heartfelt!
I love the emotion in your words.
Lovely work here and all the best
to you in this contest! Keep it up!
Jeremy0286
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