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look to the bottle

i tried to let it go
every time you'd leave
i tried to not let it bother me
after you threw things
or choked me
i put up with it cuz u were my "mother"
but now im gone from ur life forever
i won't help you when u grow old
i won't answer when u call
when you need help look to the bottle
you chose it instead of me after all

no question

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  • For You. I Cry.
    July 22, 2008

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    woow
    that was amazing
    kinda how my cousn feels bout his dad
    i really love this
    you do good work
    8)

    +Leyla+


  • RainbowEyes
    May 27, 2008
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    this is beyond amazzing. i love it


  • inhisimage
    May 20, 2008
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    aww man i like this. I understand that struggle except with me it is my aunt