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Suspended Between

Hovering between heaven and earth
lost in my own despair
celestrial helpers stand gaurd
assuring strength and protection.
Suspended between reality and fantasy
my grief a drug addicting
unworthy of sweet, divine intervention.
I rest in knowing
though my heart be torn and cut
I too can have this butt!

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  • jcat gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    I love the imagery that comes along with your 3 line here!! I would like to think that there are celestial beings hovering and just waiting to help us or catch us as we fall....As far as the butt goes.....Well I was blessed in that department!! This was great and I thank you so much for entering my contest

  • ichigosama
    May 19, 2008

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    ichigosama

    nice write. i really love it. hmm. . . suspended between. makes a good chilling sci-fi book. suspended between reality and fantasy, unworthy of sweet, divine intervention. it's a real mystery and interesting. great job!!!!


  • KayJay
    May 18, 2008

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    What a great write.. I absolutely love your tongue in cheek (no pun intended) approach to this... Great, great write!
    Ken