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The Sleep

Missing image
Like a tiny doll wrapped in eternity,
eyes wide shut to all but me.
Tells a story of little girls lost,
a time of the innocents at what cost.

Sleep my little baby,
dont you cry.
Momy is hear with tears in her eyes,
Sleep little baby.
heaven is above, 

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  • Palas Kumar Ray
    November 22
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    Soft words with vivid imagery make this poem wonderful.A perfect gift from a mother.


    • storiesuntold gold member
      November 22
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      Thankyou so much

      Yes for angels lost if a mother knows of beliefe in heaven it is a time of waiting for rejoining and love shalll continue in pure bliss


  • Roaddog Wolf
    September 30, 2008

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    I can't help from

    thinking of my mother singing nursery rhyme songs to me as a child "hush little baby , don't you cry, when you wake we will patty patty cake and ride your shiny little pony"

    • storiesuntold gold member
      November 22
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      So true are your words

      So many time I think back on the tenderness of my mothers hands and the warmth within her eyes and knowing I was so blessed as a child to be loved in such a way


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    May 18, 2008

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    great job here thank you for sharing this with me and entering in my contest... good luck in this......!

    • storiesuntold gold member
      November 22
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      Your welcome

      I know this message is a belated one but I wanted to say thanks again for your reading and knowing we are here for you always


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    May 18, 2008
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    lovely nursery rhmyme dear friend , i love this and good luck xx


    • storiesuntold gold member
      November 22
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      Hi there

      I was just reading over some of my older work and thought I would say hi

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