My moggy cat,
Used to sit on the toilet,
She used to chase mice.
she ran round the house,
and cheered us up,
And here is a bit about my cat in a poem about,
A cute little mouse.
The mouse runs around the kitchen,
He smells the delicious cheese,
Every time he gets caught by that tabby cat.
All the time it waits,
Licking it's lips, trying to taste that sweet tasting mouse,
Practicing on the sofa,
He scratches it, bites it until he feels he has practiced enough,
Always spying on that mouse,
Before he slams down his paw,
Every time that mouse is close to death,
This time that Moggy will get it.
My gorgeous cat was put down last year,
I cried and I cried,
And I cried a lot more,
But I'll never forget her,
For ever.
Author notes
By Maximum
A contest entry
- Show Love For Your Pets by FloridaGatorQueen.
380 points, ended May 27, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice.
Very touching. Keep up the good work!
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This is an awesome poem. We don't have mouse problems, but we do have roach and lizard problems. My 5 cats are good at killing them too. LOL
Sorry to hear that you had to put your cat down. In the next 6months to a year we might have to put our 2 oldest down. They are both dying of renal failure. One of the ones we might put down is pictured next to my comments.
Enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest. -
I love this poem!
and I'm so sorry about your cat, mine died early this year, so I know how you feel. I like the line 'But I'll never forget her' because it shows you really cared about your pet! Good job
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