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Discovery

 

His entry, surprise,
from her eyes waves all disguise
prepares sunny skies.

 

We see she in he
as he in she startles free
voyage discovery

 

softly unfolding
soul's dream pane warms to shared stream
nothing withholding

 

calling to the day        
as net of firefly rapture        
captures inner Way

 

light touch strips sorrow
from heart led awakening
to lip tomorrow

 

her eyes through his eyes
spill over horizon’s ties 
replete, joy comprise

 

as curtains are drawn
renascent soul unfurls wings
soar song soothes sore mourn  
 

bringing without strings
acceptance as everything
springs soul wanderings...

 

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  • SweetJane
    July 30

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    Beautiful

    I can tell that you have poured your heart into this, and the poem itself is beautiful.
    Thanks for sharing



    ~Sweet Jane~

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  • Oh my... lovely and such romantic splendor presented!

  • Excellent

    Wow! A warm and sensitive write, indeed. I think your imagery; rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one.