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Two, crazy in love,
Smiles in bloom - but too crazy
and the love will wilt.
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Two, crazy in love,
Smiles in bloom - but too crazy
and the love will wilt.
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Two, crazy in love,
Smiles in bloom - but too crazy
and the love will wilt.
Author notes
Hope this works for ya
Not sure if the actual emoticons are to be in the form 5-7-5 or if the translation is to be 5-7-5 syllables so I went for the translation option
A contest entry
- emotiku by Yemassee.
537 points, ended May 23, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This contest is showing how creative poets can be without using words...
Yours is very cute, sad, but in a cute way
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Lol... this is cute. You've used the emoticons well and it even carries a good message
Good luck in the contest
Dee
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This works just fine! It didn't have to be in the 5-7-5 format, anything under 17 syllables or 17 emoticons would work...We juat wanted to have a fun, lighthearted contest.
And yours makes perfect sense, love of such an intensity that it had to burn out. I like that! I'm glad you entered the contest!
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this is really cute....and so much fun...
all the best!
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aww how cute and cool lol.. I understood the two first lines in emoticons lol but I like it... good luck
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