She no longer needs
A soul that haunts
Or
Lays weeping hidden inside
No longer needs
One who wants to survive
Or
One who is so angry
She can not stand
All she has
When all she wants
Is nothing at all
Simple as that is
Its all she wants
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13 poets
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50 words
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A contest entry
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875 points, ended May 22, 2008, 10 entries
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Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!
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Well I have to agree with Kystal Angel and say that the simplest things are most often the hardest to achieve. I really enjoyed the direction you took this although to read it was a bit of a mind twister
Thank you so much for entering my contest
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Sometimes the simplest things in life are the hardest to get. A great write twin and I wish you many blessing and luck!
~Kystal Angel
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All she seeks is sanctuary. A quiet peace. Very heartfelt for a poem about numbness. Well done!
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Love this... a darkness and sadness in this I have felt.. it feels destitute at the end.. wanting nothing at all.
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well, sis,, I feel the pain, but the words confuse me a bit... I feel like tha sometimes, lost and haunted by my own self... good luck!
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