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duly embraced-------------

In the heart
of thick forest,
strictly in midst
of heavy greenery,
I found  a'water fall'
making sounds incessantly,
silencing all war cries
and duly embraced by peace lovers

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Beautiful Peace

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  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    Aw, so lovely and gentle! Fantastic work Best luck!


  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 18, 2008

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    Great write, sharp and to the edge of the point. I like this one of yours, your last line speaks volumes, succinctlylol


  • Ravensdark
    May 18, 2008

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    Tis indeed a peacful poem, wish I could embrace the vision more readily....but I have many dues to pay ere I sheath my sword....great poem best of luck...