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Friends
We all have these special people in our lives.
People that we tell thins too that we would never dare tell our parents.
People that will help us if we need it.
People that will always be there.
These are the most special people that god created.
And god gave me the best ones.
The most colourful.
The most playful.
The most brilliant.
The most thoughtful (sometimes).
The most talkative.
I could go on and on that my friends are the best.
Or
I can spell it out for you.
MY
        Fantastic
          Rare
          Interesting
            Eger
            Non-sane
              Devoted
              Special
    ARE
          THE
                    BEST!!!!!!!!

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  • wolfer
    May 23
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    Awesome poem

  • brightsmylesxx
    May 18

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    Although this isn't the most poetic poem, it is very sweet and a great detication to those friends that will always be there for you. The part where you kept repeating "the most..." got a little repetetive. You could have just listed the words that describe your friends instead of saying "the most" in front of every single one, if that makes sense. I especially like the part "These are the most special people that god created. And god gave me the best ones." Overall this is a pretty good triblute to your friends!

    God bless,
    ~ Bright Smyles

  • Khadidja the Wise
    May 18

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    Real friends definitely are the best. It's a really great tribute to them. It's not a traditional style poem, but I like the way you put your own style to it. And the acrostic at the end is a great idea and fits it well, too.