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Save The World

Towers fall, and buildings crumble
forests burn, and loggers cut dowm the jungle
guns fire
flood waters get higher
the bloods and the crips fight
nothing is alright
Ice melts
and children get hit with belts
the poor starve
Emos carve
America is overweight
the children fight over granny's estate
politicians make suggestions
but answers only make more questions
We made our world this way
but can we save it for a couple more days?

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  • Andy.
    March 22

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    So much turmoil over such petty things.
    Humanity is so unsane, forever becoming more and more unnatural with each generation.


  • jogn
    June 3, 2008
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    good stuff

    liked the flow. tragic. good luck in the cotest.


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    May 28, 2008

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    oh i do like this poem,
    so little words so much truth,
    this is really really good,
    i like it alot,
    best of luck in the contest,
    love kitty