The scars I thought
Would last a lifetime
Now begin to fade
Death itself
Has turned around
And gone the other way
No longer do I
Feel the need
For a knife to touch my skin
For the bad times
That once filled my life
Have now begun to dim
Author notes
Sorry, I couldnt think of a title...can you?
Any title suggestions?
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It is the simple things in life I seek out to have fleeting little moments like this.
When breathing seems easy and the bright sun is a welcomed thing.
They never last long, but they feel like the best times in all of eternity.
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Evanescing Marks (meaning evanesce means to fade, fyi.) -
oh my damn!
girl this so rocks! holy hell, I'm impressed!
Again, the point por thing...but you desrve 3 clapping smileys! *claps for her* -
This is awesome. I like how it is positive. Great Job!
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lets hope it gets better and better as your life unfurls,your very brave to write this and you must have felt better after you written it,best wishes
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aww nice...much more positive than my wrk lol
ps: dnt know y u say ur wrk is shyyt in ur profile
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hehum
sox says u gone off the rails it good but u and bently should still get married after almost pashing like that lol lmfao -
This was a very emotional write and I'm sure that many on AP can relate to this poem very much.. It is good to see that you have realized cutting is not always the right way to fix things, and I'm glad to hear that things are going a little smother for you as well.. As for a title, sometimes it's best to title it as the emotion you felt while writing your poem.. That is a least the way that I do it.. You did a wonderful job with this.. Your words flowed so well and that created a very vivid image which is a great thing because you bring the reader into your writes and they can expirence what you felt at the time that you were writing this..Keep up the great work!!
Angel
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I'm not good with titles, but congratulations on stopping cutting. That is such a hard thing to do.
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