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Naked

Sepia toned walls are gone.
I stand here;;
Alone & Naked.
Stripped of arrogance.
No condescending air.
And in the end all I am,
Is yours.

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Inspired by the word naked.

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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    June 1, 2008
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    very nice write with a quiet intensity...


    thanks so much for entering it here


    al


  • BehindTheShadow
    May 18, 2008
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    I really enjoyed this, great job.