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Leaving

Some poetry
is hard

I wanted to
try it
where
nobody
knew my name

People guessed
I am not who I appear
nobody guessed right

but

I was wrong
I may have started
to hurt people so I must go

I'm sorry.

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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    May 18

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    WHY?

    Hey Paula, Why?...I'll be sorry to see you go, I really enjoyed your poetry, you are a great free verser, a crap rhymer, but you would have got better...no...you WILL get better, PLEASE reconsider your decision.

    I'll miss you...Sue