if it meant anything to you;
shudders and sighs
sift through tongues
caught in lips,
the bitten kind
traversing a belly
flat, taut-
unused to singing
at the core
where fingers slide,
unveiling the wide eyed innocence
every momentum
in writhing
discovers fingers in rhythm
and a 'shhh'
on the octave of my throat
A contest entry
- Naked by AJ Morelli.
2500 points, ended June 3, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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a very, very nice piece, i love S2 as well as the musical theme through out, a wonderful take on the theme here....
thanks
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So beautiful and breath taking this is...
The arousal from fingers of magic.
This is "sigh" poetry indeed and well written.
Becky
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I want your inspiration! This is fantastic, Cheryl...written in the style I love, and with the words
only you can put together for a tingle and a sigh...Love, Lane
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gorgeous!
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Oh
it is so nice to see you visiting here... Love, C
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Beautiful, eloquent with all the magical stuff inside, but not contained. Smile.
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well described and very different here i think you did a very nice job i was actually picturing thid here and there good luck to you in the contest
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No shhh needed on my account
Nothing more gratifying
than a woman's aural expression
released by fingers stroking
her taut desires
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Speaking from experience are we?
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Excellent poem! Good luck in the contest.
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whoa!!! bad influence, you been dreaming again.
this sings a song of it's own, well done, and eh. 'shhhh' imagery is everything.
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No, I think you may be dreaming again lol
Love, C
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oohh mama... this is the passing of a lover's hand and the rhythm of nightsighs...
music is so sensual and it leans to the nakedness of us
very nice Chez...
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Yah...I call it 'sigh' poetry lol when no one is there, you can still think about it and *sigh...out they come
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