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Rapunzel dreams
of letting down
her long hair...
and rescue

A contest entry

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  • notorious gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    So tongue-in-cheek and clever...the fairy tale aspect is decidedly unique as well, wasn't expecting that, but now the title makes complete sense--Rapunzel was in need of a lot of help, wasn't she?

    I'm not sure I fancy the ending "and rescue" though--there's something terribly awkward about that 'and' to me. Perhaps change it to "rescue her" or something more linear? Just my thoughts...


  • Kari gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    Ah yes, Rapunzel! I didn't even think about her when I saw that picture. Lol. I think this piece is very clever indeed!

    Kari


  • cherche -d -ame
    May 18, 2008

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    this brought back a fond memories of my childhood [it was then and is still now I believe one of my favorite faerytales]. Best wishes in this contest,
    reenie