Lost soul protected
From the one who harms all
Hidden by one who is called his
She hides
Behind the grace
Of those who fight
In the light
For what is right
In response from him
Within her soul
A battle rages
Agasnt those who wish
To conform
She protects
Author notes
http://designingdivas.deviantart.com/art/Pray-For-Us-Sinners-by-bp-girl-78824447
13 poets
to write
50 words
of mind blowing substance
that is completely NOT CLICHE!!!
you happy now auntie
A contest entry
- Another absolutely cliche picture BUT........ by jcat.
875 points, ended May 22, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I think that we all rage against internal demons and those of that refuse to admit to them are just living in deciet of themselves. We all need a little protection from ourselves do we not? Very well done and thank you for entering my contest
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Excellent
What a great take on the picture. Wonderful creation and so well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
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Oh hey....this is kewl. I like where you took this. So...real. I wish you luck.
~Kystal Angel
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Nice job
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great job here.... i like... thanks for sharing... gooood luck in contest......... hugs... and have a nice day
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now this completely blows me away for reasons our family knows.. the protected lost soul.. sounds very familiar doesn't it?? guess the circle is now complete. the battle no longer wages inside of her now. its her time to stand up and be who she is. she finally knows her place in this world. and she will step and take her place like she is destined to do..
great poem though you know as well as I its beyond that.
good luck in the contest
mommy
xoxoxo
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wow I wish I had written for this prompt...stunning picture.
This is wonderful Emmy...
Dad
XXX
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