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Inner Sanctum

  Here I
rot
at tower's top

wind's whistlin'
        my thoughts

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Prompt: Tower of dreams unbidden to the winds

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  • notorious gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    Ah, another picture...very nice, and it fits the theme well.

    I adore the title as well--the word 'sanctum' just rolls off your tongue so intellectually. Plus, it works with the prompt very nicely.

    It's quite dark (both the background AND the poem), but it works. Excellent use of the word 'rot' and I adore the personification you give to the wind...doesn't it feel like the wind is saying things to one at times? Greatly expressed.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    Love it... and I sure think I've been to that tower's top a lot of times!!

    You've managed to convey a lot in 10 words!! Good luck hun

  • Kari gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    Sometimes if we think to hard it can indeed lead to depression and other things.
    This piece I can very easy relate to.

    Kari