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Beautiful emotion


To lie within the earth
Is one of the most beautiful
Things in life

To close your eyes
And just be

Open your heart
And just breathe

To search with your soul
And be free

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i hope this is ok,,,

A contest entry

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  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    ---awe---

    Magnifique, brilliant - well done!!


  • Desire gold member
    May 18, 2008
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    Oh My!!

    Powerful words You have versed and Love the last two lines to clench the message
    Wonderful!!
    Couldn't help but smile
    Love You for ALL You are
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Grammy Desire~*~