Softly the wind wraps around me
the tips of my hair swing every which way
the hem of my dress twist snugly around my legs
the ripples of the water tap upon my ankles
I feel your hands
touching me thoroughly
My eyes shut gently
welcoming the warmth of your embrace
the smell of your breath
the softness of your lips
as you whisper words into my ear
What was it
that seemed like a dream
was it the words you spoke
or the way you had embraced me
what was it
that seemed like a dream
was it the softness of your lips
or the way you had come to me
as if I were dreaming
Author notes
I just felt a breeze come through my window, and I thought immediately about him ^_^
05/18/2008
Say What You Want, If it's hurtful u'll be ignored
Comments
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My you have come along in your flow and imagery niece!This is an EXCELLENT WRITE! From a young lady like yourself this is exceptionally good and expressive....I love it!
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I like this piece very much!!!! Many times I have "Deja vu" about my late husband and I feel much of what you have expressed in this touching piece!!!!! Thank you for sharing!!!! How have you been??? I miss our chats!!!!!
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I'm glad my write has brought u memories of ur late husband
Thank u so much 4 commenting Auntie 
~Lorissa~
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