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Tanka

Blossoming poppies
remembering my mother
as a warm wind blows.

when she gave a gentle kiss
to begin my day with love.

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  • esroddo silver member
    June 9

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    Ah that was beautiful,

    A mother is such a special person, that sometimes we take for granted. Thank you for entering and good luck LISA


  • Ithica silver member
    May 18

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    I have yet to look into Tanka...??? But the poem it itself is very endearing...!!! Does your mother like to read your poetry too... Or do you keep it personal except for special writes like this..??? So lovely!!!


    • Swan song gold member
      May 18
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      no she does not infact there are many people in my walk of life that have no clue i write poetry I am not ashamed it just does not come up