I once hopped upon a carrot
and nibbled till I bit the air,
and so my carrot desire faded
and I wondered if I was a rabbit.
A contest entry
- Anything you wish by thepoetssoul.
1000 points, ended May 19, 17 entries
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Comments
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I loved it and I don't think you are a rabbit unless you have me fooled... short sweet and very cunning...
always~Steph -
haha this made me laugh tis very sweet piece of work...
idk what else to say
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I like the poem... creative
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This is the cutest poem i've ever read. I love it!
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giggle...amen to t hat!
I once thought I was the carrot,
but then came the rabbit,
and I ran like hell from there!
I really enjoyed your poem, the more you "chew" upon it,
the more you can read into and out of it!
well done!
ears/Seattle
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thats werd man
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Awesome
This one made me chuckle
Because it's so simple
Yet still holds something more through the absense of a concrete identity.
Good work ^^ -
This is a deep ass metaphor.
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Short - but deep, I think. This seems like one of those that you could read several times, and each time get a different thought from it - then again, maybe it's all real simple....but I like it because I can read this as 'humorous' or as 'deep'.
Whichever way you meant it - best wishes in your contest.
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This is very creative, and unique
Tis an exellent penning for sure
Thank you so much for this humorous poem.
Best of wishes to you
Tony
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hahaha. ahh you make me laugh
xx
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Oh so very deep. Cute write
Mylee
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