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Eternity

The breeze teased,
awakening me from sleep-
into another world.

 

 

 

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Prompt - Tower of dreams unbidden to the winds - 10 Words
Picture Credit -
http://aeternus81.deviantart.com/art/The-Tower-of-Dreams-4032692

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  • notorious gold member
    May 19, 2008

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    You followed the rules so thoroughly that I can be nothing but very pleased. =]

    Okay...and for the poem--for 10 words, this makes a great impact. I can visualize Sleeping Beauty here--you chose simple words as opposed to what I like to call "pretentious" words, and they were powerfully utilized in only 10 words...perfect flow, peaceful atmosphere...nicely done!!


  • Tattboyspet
    May 19, 2008

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    lovely take on the prompt: simple and yet spoke volumes!
    personally, I prefer the 'other' world


  • cherche -d -ame
    May 18, 2008

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    as long as it was another world of beauty and magic, that would be a wonderful way to be awakened by a teasing breeze. I found this quite cheerful [but not sure as to why]. Best wishes in this contest,
    reenie