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No More Pills (Rondelet)

What no more pills
Now what am I going to do
What no more pills
Once again have tremors and chills
Hack and sneeze 'til my face is blue
Pretty please don't change my venue
What no more pills

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  • Cinnarry gold member
    May 24, 2008

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    rhyme takes talent, unfortunately, I have no talent in this genre. I think upi need a question mark at the end?