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Season Of A Butterfly

Stretched

     across clouds


laced

     with strands of gold


lassoing

     the sun... rising


slowly 

     melting like monarch,


riding

     upon seasons



Today...

 

     that season renews

 



HAPPY BIRTHDAY...
     Dearest Donna


















 

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write me something beautiful in relation to me and my birthday. If you know me on here it should be easy to do in 27 words.

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 26, 2008
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    So beautifully sincere and loving... Thanks so very very much... x


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 21, 2008

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    Aww that is beautiful! A lovely tribute to a talented and lovely poet!


  • notorious gold member
    May 21, 2008

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    I smell a winner...
    What a nicely formatted write--it's aesthetically pleasing.

    "melting like a monarch"
    Love this.

    "that season renews"
    Like this as well...

    Nicely written with vivid detail in the atmosphere...kudos and good luck =]


  • Candy6
    May 18, 2008
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    Nice and sweet tribute to her. This is a lovely write. I like the way this looks.