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Every breath

Darkness falling
hand reaching
once grabbed, never caught.
Silence inforcing
beauty increasing
once stabbed, never seen.

Entranced, dazzled beyond...
imagine the gravity
life, forever on your wrist.

Thoughts overwhelming
body convulsing
one breath and die.
But hope will last forever

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When you want to write...and a poem comes out. That's this. And yes, I DID mean to not finish sentences.

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  • kissingsolitude
    May 18, 2008
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    i love the style of the poem and found it such an interesting, good read