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The waters fall

 

 

Mountain breasts of our mother earth,
keep powerful secrets close to her heart.
One can only hope to behold such a sight,
to feast our eyes, and sigh out all doubts.

The magnificent love and powerful splendor,
awakening our instincts of spiritual nature.
Is it the call of our hearts or the visual pleasure,
to bask our senses in her tender hush.

Some wander hectic through life.

Not able to hear,

see, feel  and  breathe,
the waterfall's cleansing wonder.
As the snow melts, so does our hearts,

perhaps this is why..our mother weeps,

both tears of joy,

and tender relief.

The waters fall.









Author notes

contest prompt: tell us about your waterfall...
i couldn't take my eyes off this one!

Right now our waterfalls are overflowing and raging our rivers
in WA. State, for the spring son has finally arrived,
and the rivers rage in jealousy full to the brim!

thankyou for sharing your beautiful waterfall with us,
inspired me..so I wrote for the one you shared with
us.

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Comments

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  • Swan song gold member
    May 24
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    This is a lovely lvoely peice of poetry and I enjoyed this read very very much well done


  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 23

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    Beautiful write

    Oh how lovely for I have never been able to see such beauty in my life .I can almost hear the roar of it its true. And the poem so delightful and oh so true .
    It was perfect indeed and the ending truly gave it life

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  • April Somerston gold member
    May 22

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    Short, sweet, and very frugal wording. However, I feel that the ending could be a little stronger and less vague. Don't make it much longer (it doesn't need to be), but it'd be nice to have a little punch at the end.

  • moluv10
    May 19

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    I love this picture. Your words enhance the picture even more. Great write here sis. Best of luck in the contest.

    . Rewarded 4


  • Lucy. gold member
    May 18

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    Some wander through life not able to hear, see, feel and breathe. I love these lines. What a stunning picture! And a beautiful poem to do it justice.

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  • Blooming Poet Greeters member
    May 18

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    You always write such moving and amazing poetry. This is no different. So many emotions all displayed wonderfully. Thanks for sharing
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