(Its just a poem, please don't think I would actually do this!)
I see tears run down your pretty face
And I get a feeling of hate
Hate for whoever did this to you
Hate for whatever made your tears so blue
Your look at me with pain in your eyes
Lying there on the floor I watch you die
I want revenge, why can't you stay?
I'm gonna kill someone today
I pick up the gun and hide it away
My hands are forever stained
My mind holds images of you
From past days when we were two
I stop and look at what I see
A monster is staring back at me
Through the mirror with murderous eyes
A tear falls deep down inside
She died because of me
Because of all that I failed to see
She found new love forever to stay
I have killed someone today
I picked up the gun and pointed away
Shot her love right in the face
My mind now holds images of you
Of when I aimed the gun and shot you too
The hate inside, turns to pain
Why did I kill? I had nothing to gain
Your eyes so cold, your face so dead
I retrieve the gun and aim it at my head
I hate myself for killing you
Now I must pay for what I can't undo
There's no way in this life I could stay
I killed myself today
A contest entry
- It's All About Love by Angelic Princess21.
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What do you imagine when you read this? What are your thoughts?
Comments
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wow this is amazing
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wow... that was just amazing! I loved how you traded points of view as the poem went on.
"There's no way in this life I could stay
I killed myself today"
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i love how you switched the point of veiws!
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this is fucking fantastic
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