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Floating At The Bottom Of The Sky

Suspended above,
This glamorous space screams "Ascend into me, drown as you go down."

Taken away by the burst of honesty, eyes close and dreams come vividly.
Of all the scenarios one could dream, seen is one held in between mind.
And in time, upon all they'll dine.

Feast upon the sumptuous dreams created by original mind.
Consume everything offered, nothing left behind, together everything will bind.
Understand why this ocean hovers overhead and why, if it collapses, everyone will be dead.

Crushing, the force keeping it up, the weight is felt and it is too much.
With one last look and good-bye, everyone will dive into the sky.
Hold the air inside or quickly die and exhale into the sun.

An ocean of bodies swimming through air and the elders who look upon, watch without a care.
The beauty and grace of so many who were, now fill the sky and block the earth.
With one final eclipse blocking the sun from the earth, we'll disappear until the sky ascends from earth.

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  • Wow this is a very creative penning.
    I really like the imagery and wording
    And the ending is very traumatic BRAVO!!!
    Thanks for your entry.
    And best of wishes to you

    Tony