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Loving The Undead

As I searched through the graveyard still looking for her
Scheming to make all things right
I wondered how scandalous things would become
When the scuttlebutt starts up again

They thought me a scoundrel for hounding her so
For scrutinizing her every move
So I’ll scramble for cover if things too hot
‘neath the heat of their scathing dead eyes

Oh my scatter-brained demon where have you gone tonight
Have you scampered away from my love
Are you hiding midst the other children of the night
Those who scorn  what I bring here for you………

Author notes

Scatterbrain scathing scheming scoundrel scorn
scandalous scamper scramble scrutinize scuttlebutt


















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  • Frogzter gold member
    May 18
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    Thanks for entering and best wishes in the contest! Will be back for judging soon!

    Frogz~
  • Thanks for joining in would have liked the ending to feel a bit more complete, other then that you told your tale through poetry.
    Warm thoughts
    Frozentearz