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Woodland dreamer

 

 

Awakening my instincts,
filling my soul, a delicious spring scent,
of mate-ly charms to behold.
Feasting my senses, waking my loins!

The teasing aroma of forest sweat, wild huckleberries,
inhaling deep........ahhhhhhhh,
babbling brook fish trout, not one but two!

The heavens have sent, my perfect mate!
How could I resist, just one little peek.
To cast my eyes upon the blessed,

Love of my life!


You were.... surprised?
I was pissed...broken hearted,

embarrassed to death.
I must walk home, no forest bride, no den snuggler,

and by the way, it was just plain,

"rude" to not,

share your catch!

 

Author notes

Contest prompt: The bear pic and grumpy bear she did face.

i hope you liked it, very fun to write!
I believe the picture is from the contest holder, from
her personal photo's.

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Comments

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  • Swan song gold member
    May 24
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    Yes I did this was excellent thank you for entering

  • this was perfect for the picture and then some, dear fairy! i loved it. i'm sure my brother bear will be honored that you wrote this for him! i think it speaks of the essence of bearhood!


    Rianna

  • a smiling piece of poetry - pissed here to me makes me think of boozing rather than annoyed and such, that is what we say when we are drunk, i am pissed up


  • moluv10
    May 19

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    A fun write here sis! I think bears are cool but i wouldn't want to get too close to one. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Lucy. gold member
    May 18

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    lol, this was cute! Great imagery and fitting background too. I love the last two stanzas.

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