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An Intoxicated Eye

Drowning
as a fly
in white whine

beauty resides
inside

In a list

A contest entry

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    Awesome 10 words!! You really are on a roll with the shorter write!! Congrats on the Gold!


  • perfectsunset gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    Beautiful!

    Wow this was amazing. Such a great take on the prompt and very unique idea! Loved it! & congrats on the gold


  • delightfulmess silver member
    May 18, 2008

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    WHOA!!!! great job...
    Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila